Mar 28 2008

Another Haiku-like Substance

Published by James at 4:53 am under Poetry

Death
Comes as an enemy
Delivering to a Friend




One Response to “Another Haiku-like Substance”

  1.   Adielon 30 Mar 2008 at 11:18 am

    I really like this one. It’s so amazing to me that just a few well placed words can have so much power. Well done.

    (Plus, if you remove the first line it’d also make a spiffy riddle. Just in case you ever find yourself lost in a dank cave in a riddle battle with a odd creepy creature.)

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